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Pretty jamin'. You did amazing work on the loop, that was really impressive. The percussion really held together the beat, but some of the high notes were really harsh, if that makes sense. Also I think the lower tune in the background should be brought out more to even out the higher-pitch. Regardless, I really liked it and I think you should definitely keep doing what you're doing.

You definitely got a lot of potential here. You can flow really well and the music goes really well with everything but It seems like you might have rushed a few of the lyrics. I don't think anyone wants to hear the word "pepperoni" in a rap beat. Don't let that get you down though, you obviously have a lot you can go on from this and if you sit down and put in a lot of effort you could easily have a 5/5 track within a month or so. If I were you I'd flesh this out into a longer, full-length track. That might be a lot of work, but I think it would definitely be worth it.

KleptoidKat responds:

lol hence the reason I wrote "throwaway rap", wasnt it hilarious tho?

I have written full tracks though most are unreleased, due to various reasons.

Hey! But thanks so much for the thoughts! I like pepperoni.

- Qwaint

I'm not the biggest fan of the "wubs" from 2:05-2:50, and I think they take a bit away from what makes this track so amazing. From then on though, I think it equals out to a really great balance. But I don't want you to think that this isn't a great piece. Seriously, keep up the amazing work this is fantastic.

Xtrullor responds:

Yeah I pretty much agree with you. The thing with my whole arrangement and composition in general is that it's quite not there yet. I may have the technical intricacy, but the composition may let it down a bit. I think the latter is what really makes music enjoyable most of the time, so I have a good reason to improve on that case.

Thanks for the comment.

Wow, simply amazing. Great composition, can I ask what program you use? I use FL and I can't even get close to this fantastic of a piano sound.

pit80 responds:

Well.. Honestly... I don't like FL. I start compose music too long time ago. Then was DOS system ;) Of course Don't have Fl yet. So use very old program. No matter what program. Matter it's a VST instruments and brain :) ;)

P.s. You can use programs like fast tracker, Impulse tracker, Cubase. Something like this. But i don't think you'll like it.

I wish I had a lot to talk about but I really don't, and I mean that in a extremely positive way! Everything was well done. The only major complaint is the drums that kick in @2:34 come in a bit too hard and leave a bit too suddenly. I think it would sound better if they had a build up/fade out or maybe just less of an impact. Regardless, the vibrations in the background work really well, and the bell-sounding effects really pull everything together. Keep doing stuff like this and you'll make a lot of fans. Great work.

Really neat! You have a lot of talent with groove and stuff, so try to build off of that. As I said, it was really neat, but it felt like it was missing the big finish. I was waiting the entire time for a big crash and then jazzy finish to complete the song. That however, is just me. I don't want you to think you did a bad job here. The song was really unique and was really catchy. If I were you, I'd consider using some of the stuff you did here into other songs. Regardless, fantastic job and really keep it up.

Rekuiem responds:

I agree a lot about missing that big finish, in many ways it ties into how I was feeling when I wrote this song, in many ways I had been trying to travel through these grooves and as I got deeper into some of my darker places, as for going into other songs the ending crawl is a sort of homage to a previous song I made called On Deck. This one in many ways or me was like a struggle, really glad you dig it! Thanks

It's a really simple, but good track. A lot of repetition, but not really in a bad way. The beat comes together really well with the transitions and the background noise makes the piece really atmospheric. Overall though, it just feels like it's missing something. Otherwise though, really solid and quality work. Good job.

First off, the drum part of the song was awesome. The drop beats and little things thrown in here and there like wood hits really made it great. I didn't like the base piece @ 0:40 or so, it just lacked a lot of variety or dynamic. Once it comes back in @ 1:30 it works really well with the piece but I don't think it should have stuck out earlier in the song. Otherwise, it's a really good song. Short and to the point, no fluff. Great job!

PrognoiseBIG responds:

I Appreciate your honesty.
+Good that you liked the drumms & Percss. Variety is a point they almost come back every review.
I will work on it in the next Project.

Short and to the point, no fluff. Great job! ( Thanks you for your time )

It takes a bit to get going, but once it really starts up there isn't much to complain about. Everything is done really well, and the quality of the work really shows. The higher-pitched sounds could have stood out a bit more and been more of a factor, but they really pulled the piece together at the end. So maybe less of a buildup, or more components that flicker in and out of the song, but otherwise great piece and really well done.

A lot of potential here. Everything you did was great, melody, percussion, and so on were all really nice. However, if you're going to do a build up piece like this where things are slowly added on, you should consider shortening up the piece a bit. I think this song would've been much better condensed into a 5/6 minute song. Really though, good job. A few parts it seemed really jumbled, and like there wasn't much thought put into certain patterns. But otherwise, really good job. Mixing was done well and you really made it come together.

xenxies responds:

Thank you for your response, when I get stoned I kinda end up with a song that almost never stops, so length wise I'll keep that in mind for future pieces. I also made this track (like most of my songs) in like one day so if I space out my work I could give more thought into it. For my next upload, I'll try to get things going on the complexity side of things.

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